In-class free write

1. what kind of argument are you trying to make in your essay? I was agreeing with the article that Sommers wrote regarding student writers and how they view revision vs. experienced writers. If i was part of that study I would have commented pretty much the same as the student writers.

2. How are you using the text in your draft? not sure

3. how have you organized your draft so far? Just started writing even though I am sure it does not flow at this time. My intro / opening statement I think is pretty good... I need to look at it again tomorrow and the next day to build it up. need to include more quotes

4. what do you like about your draft so far? introduction

IF you had to identify one sentence or passage that seems to to the heart of what you are trying to say, what would it be? what i view as redoing

5. What are you struggling with in your draft? More to write about-writers block... I did option one

what questions do you have? what else to include

what kinds of feed back would you like? suggestions of what i could elaborate on